Thursday 20 January 2011

Final Magazine-Group

Here is our final magazine, as a group we decided to merge our ideas from our own magazines together.

http://thejama2.blogspot.com/2011/01/final-r-cover.html

Final Poster-Group

Here is our final poster, as a group we decided on doing this layout from when we first designed it by drawing so a rough and 2nd rough edit was not needed individually.

http://thejama2.blogspot.com/2011/01/final-poster-layout.html

Tuesday 18 January 2011

Magazine Final- Individual

Magazine FINAL

Soap Magazine Feedback for Rough Design

Design
· Like the bubbles
· Good tagline
· Void of white, needs filling

Colours
· Brighter colours- taglines at the bottom
· Change of colour of the title

Layout
· Text at bottom across the pictures
· Barcode on the left?
· Put boarder at the top and move the text down

Font
· Change font of title
· Bolder fonts

Typical Convention
· Needs date and issue numbers
· Lots of punctuation

Wednesday 5 January 2011

Feedback for Rough Cut of our Soap

Our group showed our classmates the rough cut for our soap. We gathered feedback and this is what they said:
  • Titles worked well as they fit in with the conventions of a soap, maybe need something before the first scene.
  • Don't understand the way the 'gran' talked in the pub, the accent interpreted doesnt work.
  • Scenes are distinctive, understand the different types of storylines and what they are about.
  • Titles at the end work very well, there is a clear understanding on the information given to the audience.