Design
· Like the bubbles
· Good tagline
· Void of white, needs filling
Colours
· Brighter colours- taglines at the bottom
· Change of colour of the title
Layout
· Text at bottom across the pictures
· Barcode on the left?
· Put boarder at the top and move the text down
Font
· Change font of title
· Bolder fonts
Typical Convention
· Needs date and issue numbers
· Lots of punctuation
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