Feedback for Rough Cut of our Soap

Our group showed our classmates the rough cut for our soap. We gathered feedback and this is what they said:

• Titles worked well as they fit in with the conventions of a soap, maybe need something before the first scene.
• Don't understand the way the 'gran' talked in the pub, the accent interpreted doesnt work.
• Scenes are distinctive, understand the different types of storylines and what they are about.
• Titles at the end work very well, there is a clear understanding on the information given to the audience.